It was there in that hallway he found life. With the burning cold metal pressed against his teeth and noxious smell of gun powder seeping into his nostrils, he had never felt so alive. His finger aching from the tense painful pause as he considered the events leading up to this point. He shed one tear. One lone tear for all those he hurt especially her. He wept for her. He signed his name, Gabriel Ray, on the crumpled note left only for her. The painful pause was brought to end. The finger was relieved of its painfully transfixed pause. Bang! With that sharp piercing sound, he was finally alive. |
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I started writing it in 3rd period wednesday. I hope to possible finish it out but knowing me its not going to happen.
Anyway in case you were wondering the general plot is that of a estranged new kid in a small town. He is highly intelligent and has an intense care for others, but Due to his odd appearance he is alienated by the town. Despite this he makes some unlikely freinds, but as with every story things don't stay good for long. Who is the girl he hurt? What did he do to hurt her? What about the others? |
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